The Next Story, Part 2. Title: The Virus - Page 2

Rndm_Perfection · 09-11-2003, 03:30 PM

Excellent, Vampyr! I look forward to reading more of the story.

P.S. I wanna see how well Ginkasa writes. Based on his posts, methinks Crappy should've been his extra word and not mine ¦¬Þ

just kiddin' ya, Ginkie.

VashTheStampede · 09-11-2003, 06:10 PM

nice story, better than mine. I hope that your story does good, which it will. Sorry for starting my story before yours again

GiMpY-wAnNaBe · 09-13-2003, 01:45 PM

errr...is it too late for me to participate in this? i've been away for a while...

Vampyr · 09-13-2003, 05:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Gimpy

errr...is it too late for me to participate in this? i've been away for a while...

I'll make an exception for you Gimp. Just because it was your birthday a few weeks ago

Just give me a one word description of yourself.

ZebraRampage · 09-13-2003, 05:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Vampyr

I'll make an exception for you Gimp. Just because it was your birthday a few weeks ago

Just give me a one word description of yourself.

I can't wait for the next part of your story Vampyr. I've been anticipating it ever since I read the first part.

Vampyr · 09-13-2003, 06:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Zebra

I can't wait for the next part of your story Vampyr. I've been anticipating it ever since I read the first part.

Cool. Im glad someone is looking forward to it. Expect it to be posted tonight.

ZebraRampage · 09-13-2003, 07:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Vampyr

Cool. Im glad someone is looking forward to it. Expect it to be posted tonight.

Awesome, I can't wait. So there is your story, and now Battle Royale 2, woohoo.

Rndm_Perfection · 09-13-2003, 07:59 PM

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Originally Posted by ZebraRampage

Awesome, I can't wait. So there is your story, and now Battle Royale 2, woohoo.

lmao... poor, poor newbie Vash.

ZebraRampage · 09-13-2003, 08:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Rndm_Perfection

lmao... poor, poor newbie Vash.

Yeah, lol, I was actually interested in his story, and what would was going to happen. But I guess we will never know, poor Vash.

VashTheStampede · 09-13-2003, 08:04 PM

waah, no one likes my story..again..ugah blah.

Happydude · 09-14-2003, 12:43 AM

Vampyr · 09-14-2003, 01:52 AM

Im trying, I really am. Ive written almost all of the second chapter, but I think Ive contracted something. It could be that its late and that I havnt eaten anything in 12 hours, but Im not hungry. I dont know whats wrong. Im going to bed, perhaps I will feel well enough to finish the last bit first thing tomorrow morning. Just to make up for it, here is a teaser:

From "The Virus" part 2:

"He was still on his knees, his hand extended, but he was no longer reaching for a goddess, instead he was reaching into the blackness of midnight. He stood up slowly and looked around at his surroundings. He was standing on a suburban street, surrounded by houses with no lights, the windows all shuttered and dank, and he could practically smell the lack of humanity. In the distance he could see the rise of towers and spires that ripped into the sky, piercing the zenith of this artificial world. For it was artificial. He looked up at the sky, and somehow new that it was a black dome, no sun would ever grace this city with light, no moon would ever filter down through the night time sky. He raised his now more slightly pointed nose to the sky, and inhaled through his nostrils. When he exhaled, no air came out. He could smell blood, somewhere in the vicinity of this hell dome was a creature whose heart still beat, whose lungs still pumped out oxygen. Somewhere, there was a creature that still had a soul."

jeepnut · 09-14-2003, 03:52 AM

Wow, creepy. I like it!

Happydude · 09-14-2003, 10:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Vampyr

Im trying, I really am. Ive written almost all of the second chapter, but I think Ive contracted something. It could be that its late and that I havnt eaten anything in 12 hours, but Im not hungry. I dont know whats wrong. Im going to bed, perhaps I will feel well enough to finish the last bit first thing tomorrow morning. Just to make up for it, here is a teaser:

From "The Virus" part 2:

"He was still on his knees, his hand extended, but he was no longer reaching for a goddess, instead he was reaching into the blackness of midnight. He stood up slowly and looked around at his surroundings. He was standing on a suburban street, surrounded by houses with no lights, the windows all shuttered and dank, and he could practically smell the lack of humanity. In the distance he could see the rise of towers and spires that ripped into the sky, piercing the zenith of this artificial world. For it was artificial. He looked up at the sky, and somehow new that it was a black dome, no sun would ever grace this city with light, no moon would ever filter down through the night time sky. He raised his now more slightly pointed nose to the sky, and inhaled through his nostrils. When he exhaled, no air came out. He could smell blood, somewhere in the vicinity of this hell dome was a creature whose heart still beat, whose lungs still pumped out oxygen. Somewhere, there was a creature that still had a soul."

if you don't post the second chapter within the next 24 hours, ill fly out to kentucky and kick you in the balls until they explode!...have fun

Dyne · 09-14-2003, 12:51 PM

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Originally Posted by happydude666

if you don't post the second chapter within the next 24 hours, ill fly out to kentucky and kick you in the balls until they explode!...have fun

Toronto to Kentucky

$623.57 USD
Northwest Airlines
YYZ depature: 6:30 am
CVG arrival: 10:11 am

Don't do it! He's not worth it!