The Next Story, Part 2. Title: The Virus

Ginkasa · 09-10-2003, 09:32 PM

Pretty good. It isn't perfect (there are a few minor mistakes and its a little short) but its pretty good.

Much better read than Dyflon's thing.

*shrugs and walks away*

Dylflon · 09-10-2003, 09:42 PM

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Originally Posted by Ginkasa

Pretty good. It isn't perfect (there are a few minor mistakes and its a little short) but its pretty good.

Much better read than Dyflon's thing.

*shrugs and walks away*

That really hurt my feelings. I try to do something people can enjoy and you have nothing but bad things to say about it. Well you know what Ginkasa? You should go **** yourself.

Oh, and Vampyr. Feel free to post your story.

Jonbo298 · 09-10-2003, 11:03 PM

Pretty good so far. I wonder how my character will turn out with the laziness

GameMaster · 09-10-2003, 11:04 PM

Will my lying come at the expense of the live's of others?

ZebraRampage · 09-10-2003, 11:17 PM

I hope that when you write about my word, yummy, that you tie it in with Gravy somehow. Er...nvm...don't ask...

Oh yeah, also, great start Vampyr. Very descriptive, and everything you said made me think.

Jason1 · 09-10-2003, 11:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Dylflon

That really hurt my feelings. I try to do something people can enjoy and you have nothing but bad things to say about it. Well you know what Ginkasa? You should go **** yourself.

Oh, and Vampyr. Feel free to post your story.

Aw comon man...simmah down nah...I didnt even read your story, except for the first chapter...I still respect you for putting all that time an effort into it though.