Battle Royale Part6

Dylflon · 09-03-2003, 11:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ginkasa

What was with the switching from the narrarator to a character's thoughts mid paragraph with no notice? A better way to show what the character is thinking, without showing the characters thoughts word for word, would be to show their reaction from their thought...

Example:

Rndm's eyes widened as he realized that Vampyr was wearing body armor.

Something like that.

*shrugs and walks away*

Meh. Leave me alone.

Dyne · 09-04-2003, 12:27 AM

Watch out Ginkasa. Remember who has the Uzi.

Oh, and that's EXACTLY what I'd say if I was really doing this. You've captured me.

Ace195 · 09-04-2003, 12:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dyne

Watch out Ginkasa. Remember who has the Uzi.

Oh, and that's EXACTLY what I'd say if I was really doing this. You've captured me.

lol.. hmm. I wonder how accurate you would be with an Uzi.. but eh who cares about accuracy when you can spray at more then 30 rounds a min. But you have to remember ammo..