Battle Royale Part2

[Dylflon]

Originally Posted by Ginkasa

It would be much better if you could simply write these really short "parts" together, and release them at once. Chapters this small really detract from the story.

Also, don't just list a bunch of people who have died in the end. There's no point of having those characters if we don't even meet them before they die. Show each and every death in the story.


*shrugs and walks away*

That would take a long time to write.

I don't show them all because I focus on certain main characters each time. There should be an element of mystery as to how the characters act and what weapons they have. I'd like this information to be presented as the story unfolds.