The crap I write at 2:30 a.m. (post two hours later when I can't sleep)

[Vampyr]

Originally Posted by SlyMoogle

Nothing like death and destruction to start off my morning.

Agreed.

That was really awesome, ginkasa. Pyromaniacs are just..cool. lol. And it was written incredibly well, and once I started reading it, I couldnt stop. Have some rep, if you will.

Other than the error moogle pointed out, the only thing I saw that was wrong (and it was a small thing), was when he "raised his telescope to his"... I think you left out the word "eye".

But I was never one to care much about grammar, to me, it's the content of the story that matters, and this one had some great content.