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Re: Any of you?
Old 02-14-2004, 01:54 AM   #16
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Another shorter one I had posted in the poetry thread.

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Fragments of closure
Bleeding blue
The color of my soul
I was painted when you left
Screaming black
The color of the world
The life sucked dry – my vampire -
Gray cloud death
Your vanishing feelings
Unforgetting rainy day
Nothing left
The story of my life
Pick up the pieces again
Moving on
My closure complete now
The need for you – memory

Goodbye.
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I wrote this as I was typing (freestyle) a while back, so it's pretty fragmented (hence the title). But I decided to keep it anyway. I guess it kind of... well... signifies my closure to a relationship that ended a while ago. Since you obviously couldn't guess that.... Not at all...
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Old 02-14-2004, 10:11 AM   #17
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Great poems everybody. I used to write some poetry a year or two ago... It wasn't very good, and it was mostly to get my anger out, lol... But I might take a stab at some feelings today, and I might post it when I'm done!
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