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Are there any poets or lyric writers here?
I do some now and again, and I thought this could be a place where we could share our writings. I'll start, regardless... Going Through the Motions -MR Alarm clock, sunshine, birds sing outside, Breakfast has no taste, and at the milk you stare. You're going through the motions, And no one seems to care. Bus driver, dirty seat, cloudy skies above. Where the bus goes, you don't know where. You're going through the motions, And no one seems to care. Look down the street, fourty thousand faces all look happy, busy, no despair. You're going through the motions, And no one seems to care. Another day gone, not one look, You even tidied up your hair. You're going through the motions, And no one seems to care Lying now, on a bed, thinking, This world JUST WONT BE FAIR. You're going through the motions, And no one seems to care. Listen now, dont think or speak, I am proud of you, you perservere. For going through the motions, I love you for that, my dear. |
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wow i get that
now im going through the motions, and no one seems to care Good Job +rep |
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You know what's a good place to post writing? The Writer's Guild section of the forum. :p
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Indeed it is. But since this is My Forum, we're going to do it my way, and I say it stays. :D
Anyway, I did post this in a poetry thread a while back in the Writer's Guild. But since that thread died, I'll post it here too. I wrote this when I was in a rut. Or Either ________ Climbing up a ladder with no end and no beginning. Floating down a river with no paddle and no shore. Speckled with the scars earned at the crossroads of life's travels; my trophies of the pains I never knew I would endure. And through the sadness, through the pain, I struggle with a question. Is life worthwhile for the trip, or for the destination? . . . Or Either? |
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I like your poetry...
I write some myself too... I'll post a couple later (when I'm back home) |
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here's one of mine
"Flying" It's not that she was miserable, or dreary everyday, She did agree with life, and yearned for it to stay, yet all she really wanted was to fly away. In life she held the principals the virtues of the day she followed all directions, and seldom did delay but all she really wanted was to fly away. Away from all the troubles That live around the block Away from the door of time And fears that seemed to knock It's not as if she feared another day But all she really wanted was to fly away. Away from "I'm not good enough" Away from "something more" Away from "Can you help me,” and an ever whispering roar, Away from all the requests, she felt she must obey Yes, all she really wanted was to fly away. To leave an open window And open wide her wings To stretch them to forever And see what yonder brings To see the stars in all their bright array Indeed all she truly wanted was to fly away. To soar with the birds And dive through the clouds to feel silence and solace above all the crowds to feel the sun's life-giving, golden ray To feel the beauty, to simply fly away. It was her soul's desire, to be herself one day, to be her only master to do things her way she needed her own person to discover who she was to have herself come first away from all else, above above all the confusion above the rattles of the day what she needed most was to fly away. No one understood, or thought of what SHE had to say until they looked around and found she had flown away. She flew where ere the wind took her, Where she hoped she could find peace She flew where she felt happy Where she could find release She never knew that she could feel this way Until the day She stretched her wings and flew away. |
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Crystal Shatter
Leave me alone, I wish for solitude Don’t come in, my space is not yours I won’t let you near and you won’t want Let me scream and make the CRYSTAL SHATTER I had a bad day, it doesn’t matter Caused by a flood, not of your concern We’ll clash one day, you know it is true Just let me scream and make the CRYSTAL SHATTER It sparkles so bright With the sun creeping in The beauty is unbelievable I want to SCREAM, I want to cry, I want to have Time Let me scream and make the CRYSTAL shatter. ~Alexis MM McGeahy 9 Oct 2003 |
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I applaud for your poems Kitana and J-S
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Er...
Interesting development. I submitted a poem I wrote for grade 10 english into a poetry contest a while back. Now I'm up for Poet of the Year. This confuses me. I'm also now published in 3 books. The only problem is that those cheap skates won't pay for my plane trip to Orlando for the ceremony. Even if I was sure to win I couldn't afford to fly there. But I'm honored to be nominated. :) I shall share with you the poem. It's about teen suicide. Dark Eyes By: Dylan Innes Nervous silence, Shaky hands, Blue Pills, Dark eyes. Dry mouth, Forced swallow, Uneasy feeling, Dark eyes. Mind racing, Cold sweat, Spinning room, Dark eyes. Pounding head, Distorted vision, Numb skin, Dark eyes. Heart pounding, Silent screaming, Blank stare, Dark eyes. |
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yeah, i submitted a poem that I wrote in 9th grade and it is published and I have been offered for that Poetry of the Year thing too...can't afford it though...
good poem |
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Yeah. That poetry awards things sounds like a huge scam to me. Theym ake money by telling you your poem has been published then relatives buy the poetry books, We're dealing with some evil marketing geniuses here.
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Awsome poems everyone... I love all the imagry.
Some of the poetry award things are real-usually the ones sponsered by colleges and universities (I was in a community college anthology of high school students a few times.) Congoes to everyone, espeially you guys who were in legitamate books! keep em coming! |
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It Lives, It Waits
-MR, freeverse Anybody here feel the electricity in the air? I sense it Anybody here feel the loneliness within? I live it I haven’t got the guts to leave or the determination to stay Ask yourself ‘what is hell’ I couldn’t see life any other way Look at the mirror, see your eyes Does it scare you? You may never be the same again Does it faze you? Hide for now, deal with it later It can wait Don’t give in, don’t feed your desires They can wait Bury it all in your list of memories Hear it cry Convince yourself it’s all over C’mon…try Starve the thoughts that once ate YOU up Challenge the irony Dig the grave Cast the stone Toss it all away Look in the mirror, now You’re no longer scared? Good You’ve hidden You didn’t give in You’re convinced you’ve conquered the pain So sit back Ease your worries Soak up the sun Don’t get too comfortable, though Deep within, we all know it’s still there It lives… It waits. |
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Mine:
Everywhere I look, Butterflies. Everywhere I smell, Flowers. Everywhere I hear, Music. Everywhere I dream, You... :love: |
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These are great poems guys...you people are getting some +rep action. :D
I myself havnt written any poetry since those last ones I posted in the writers guild...I havnt had any inspiration to write. :( But I might open up word pad and get the creative juices flowing. [edit] here are the poems I posted before...read them if you dare.... http://www.gametavern.net/forums/sho...66&postcount=2 http://www.gametavern.net/forums/sho...8&postcount=22 http://www.gametavern.net/forums/sho...4&postcount=33 |
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