You and I seem to interpret superior differently... I was saying that I am superior in the sense that I am better than everyone... Ever.
That everybody should bow down to my superiorness.
But whatever, I died (the dumbest way imaginable) so...whatever...
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Anyway, this was good. A few mistakes; punctuation and the like. You might want to spread the paragraphs out more. Make more, shorter ones.
Besides that its fine.
*shrugs and walks away*
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