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Originally Posted by SlyMoogle
Nothing like death and destruction to start off my morning.
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Agreed.
That was really awesome, ginkasa. Pyromaniacs are just..cool. lol. And it was written incredibly well, and once I started reading it, I couldnt stop. Have some rep, if you will.
Other than the error moogle pointed out, the only thing I saw that was wrong (and it was a small thing), was when he "raised his telescope to his"... I think you left out the word "eye".
But I was never one to care much about grammar, to me, it's the content of the story that matters, and this one had some great content.