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Old 12-14-2002, 10:18 AM   #16
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K thanks. I guess I won't go into writing poems.

Funny though, it took me half an hour to make.
I was walking the dog at 11:30. It was dark and came to the t-joint. I usually take the left. But I felt uncomfortable there...
Then I thought of Disney's Alice in Wonderland. Where some weird dog erases the road and Alice is left alone in the dark.

After that I thought of a punch-line to make the link to reality...

Bleh



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Old 12-14-2002, 07:37 PM   #17
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I thought it was a good poem
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