Fanfic: Gerdor, the Region of Evil...

[Angrist]

Remember how Zelda.com had the Stockpot Inn?? Where everybody could write a next chapter to the story that a webmaster had started??

Well, I wrote a chapter. But when I wanted to send it, they stopped the Stockpot Inn.
But I still have the story on my HD.
It's not yet really finished, the chapter is about twice as long, but I haven't typed it yet. The title of the chapter was supposed to be called Gerdor.

Here it goes, tell me what you think!! (especially you Xantar!)

Oh yeah, some other guy made up those teleport gauntlets...



The deserted lands of Gerdor, the Region of Evil. Link looked into the big dark valley which was covered with a thick mist. Although the magic Gauntlets were fortunately able to teleport both Link and Epona, they couldn't bring them closer to Rondard than the edge of the valley. From where he was, sitting on Epona, Link couldn't see much, so he just started walking.
It was cold and windy, and Link shivered. He looked around. He didn't see much vegetation, and the plants he did see were dark-green, almost black. He was glad he had taken enough food for both him and Epona. Although Epona was very strong, she wasn't able to carry all the stuff Link had collected throughout the years. But he had his most important items like the hookshot and his bow and arrows.

Out of the mist, an old building appeared. He halted Epona and inspected it. It was made of stone and wood, and trough a window Link could see it was deserted. He looked around. He had the feeling he was being watched… He looked up. There, on the roof of the building stood a creature looking down on him. It was a grey-blue colored beast, with a thin hairless body and a big mouth. As soon as it saw it was spotted by Link, the creature jumped away, making strange scared noises. Because Link was kind of hoping to get to Rondard unnoticed, he immediately started the pursuit on the animal, so it wouldn't alert it's friends. He galloped around the building and saw the creature was fast. It ran on four legs, and it was too far away to strike it with his sword, so Link grabbed his bow and an arrow. While Link saw they were approaching some more houses, he shot the arrow, and the animal collapsed. Link stopped near the dead body and dismounted. It was an ugly and bony beast, about the size of Link. It had an big mouth with sharp teeth and dark flesh.

Link pulled the arrow out of the carcass , so he could use it again. He walked back to Epona and looked into the direction where the creature was heading. He could hear harsh voices shouting and drums beating...

to be continued...