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Old 10-08-2003, 10:37 PM   #1
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Poetry

Alone in the world I was lost without light,
Somewhere among the darkness was a glint of light,
There you stand with your beautiful smile,
A princess amongst hags to beseech me all the while,
I love you with every hint of my being,
And without you I am lost without meaning.

So to my love I say this,
Stay for ever and keep me in bliss,
For without you I am nothing
Except for a man,
But I become a superhero when I touch your hand,
But for now I say adieu and farewell when we meet again
Upon our love we will dwell.


Here is something I wrote because my girlfriend wanted a poem. Tell me what you think. It doesn't really matter I already sent it to her. If you want to read my other poetry then go.
Fallin' For You
Trying to Breath
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