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Originally Posted by HappyDude666
nice vampyr...but to tell you the truth i liked the first one more...it had a better ending
as for feedback and stuff...you should re-read it like once or twice to find mistakes, cause i found quite a few, dont feel like refering back to them now thouhg, but if you read it you'll see what im talkin bout.
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Yes, I agree that the first one was better. This one did have cool action and stuff in it, though.
And about the mistakes, I do what I can. My girlfriend wasnt online when I first finished it, and she's my editor.
