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Originally Posted by Ginkasa
What was with the switching of tenses? At one point it would be past (like the rest of the chapters) and other times it would be present tense.
You need to pick one and stick with it.
*shrugs and walks away*
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I wanted to get a differnet perspective fore the last chapter. You know? I wanted to get in their heads a little more.
You act as if I was writing a serious piece of literature. You only say what I did wrong. You never say "Well, I like that you did this."
No. You don't.
I'm glad you got shot in the spine 3 times.