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Originally Posted by Dyflon
His concentration is broken. Not too far away Rndm sees Jewels walking. She's got guns! Rndm figures he can surprise her and get that sweet weapon payload. Rndm sneaks up close to her. She stops and sits down. She's obviously tired. Her hair is matted to her face. Rndm lunges his spear at her. It pierces her back just shy of hitting her spinal chord. She lets out a deafening scream. Rndm pulls it out and prepares to thrust again. He thrusts the spear into her again. She slumps forward. She's not dead but she's sobbing.
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God I loved that part. Not that I have anything against Jewels, because I dont, but it was the best described, emotionally envoking part of the piece. I loved it. Bravo.
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Talbain emerges from the bushes behind him and fires 3 shots in his spine. Ginkasa falls to the ground. Blood drips from Ginkasa's mouth.
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