[Vampyr]

Ill double post on this, but this post has a different subject; to deliver my constructive criticism about this series.

So far things have been great, and Dyflon has been putting out amazing pieces in the short time he is taking to write them. I have noticed varioius spelling and grammatical errors, but not enough to deteriorate the overall quality of the story. If he wasnt trying to put one out everyday, I have no doubt that it would be near perfect. But I dont blame him for this, no one wants to wait that long to read something like this. We want our instant gratification, and Dyflon is successfully giving it to us. So far he has been able to create a certain air of suspense that carries over from each volume to the next. The most recent of which was full of suspense and action, and I enjoyed it quite well. The only thing I would like for him to do differently is more detail. The last fight, the one that involved the transfer member, was described very well, but the first fight was kind of dull and lacked any real detail. Like I said, though, had he had more time to put these things out, this would more than likely be fixed.

Overall, things are going exceptionally well, although I did die an unfair death, and would have slaughtered Rndm if it had been any other way. Lol, just joking on that. Keep up the good work Dyflon, and just remember, the more adjectives, the better. I hope we can expect the last volume in this series to be the best and most action filled one so far.