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Originally Posted by Ginkasa
So what if it takes a long time to write? As the writer of this story, you shouldn't be trying to pump them out as quick as possible. You should instead be trying to make them as good as they can be, and if it takes more than a hour (better yet, a week or more!) to get a chapter out to do it, so be it.
I would rather read a very well written and entertaining story that has a month or two wait between each chapter rather than a medicoire at best story with short chapters with a one or two hour wait between them.
Xantar's a very good example of this. He takes forever sometimes to get the new chapter of his fanfic out, but it can almost be guaranteed that the chapter is going to be a very entertaining read and with a very well developed story and characters.
Next thing...
If you're going to kill off a character before we even meet him, what's the point of having the character? I don't get any mystery from not seeing some character being killed. All I get is disappointment.
So far, this has been pretty disappointing. Spend more time on each chapter, develop it more, show more characters.
*shrugs and walks away*
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You haven't seen Battle Royale (the movie this story is based on) have you?
It focuses on some key players and follows them. A lot of the time you don't know how the people die. It just happens.
This is just the beginning. I need to weed out some people and get central characters and events happening. I just needed to thin the numbers quickly.
I have some chief pro and antagonists that were involved in the event I didn't show. Let the events unfold. But for you, I will chronicle the other things that happened. For you.