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Originally Posted by Dylflon
Thanks for thine feedback. I will go into more detail. I just wanted to put the beginning together quickly so I could start writing the more exciting stuff.
I did read through it myself again. I'll go back and improve it now.
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Try not to hurry through certain parts to get to stuff you would like to write better. It makes the story suffer.
*shrugs and walks away*