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Typhoid · 11-24-2005, 10:52 PM

I liked the set, but I'll say after hearing it, you could stand a little more emotion in your voice when delivering your jokes. Not the whole thing, but I noticed a few jokes were nearly the same tone the whole way, and that can make or break a joke.

But other than that it was actually good.

Good job, I hope you make it.

11-24-2005, 10:52 PM	#3
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