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GameMaster · 11-23-2005, 03:37 PM

Yeah, Kevin Costner also had a message in a bottle in his 1999 film. His story was a little more romantic. You're screenplay is great and the characters have depth. The problem is your plot. People just don't want to hear about some 41 year-old message. Where's the action in that? Add some guns and maybe a one night stand and then we'll talk.

11-23-2005, 03:37 PM	#4
GameMaster ★★★ GameMaster is offline Now Playing: Posts: 14,194	Re: Message from the grave Yeah, Kevin Costner also had a message in a bottle in his 1999 film. His story was a little more romantic. You're screenplay is great and the characters have depth. The problem is your plot. People just don't want to hear about some 41 year-old message. Where's the action in that? Add some guns and maybe a one night stand and then we'll talk.