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fingersman · 04-01-2002, 11:17 PM

Not bad not bad...........it has me interested...........oh course there was that....he dreamt he was falling, he was falling....that sounded a little to repeative to me. i found some other things I think could be improved but I'm tired and sleepy.

BTW hurry up with chp 4 will you?? damn you and Xantar must be the laziest writers in the whole world.

04-01-2002, 11:17 PM	#3
fingersman The sexiest man in Gametavern fingersman is offline Location: Barbados Now Playing: with God and opporunities Posts: 1,526	Not bad not bad...........it has me interested...........oh course there was that....he dreamt he was falling, he was falling....that sounded a little to repeative to me. i found some other things I think could be improved but I'm tired and sleepy. BTW hurry up with chp 4 will you?? damn you and Xantar must be the laziest writers in the whole world. __________________ ~Light travels faster than sound. This is why some people appear bright until you hear them speak.