Thats a cool poem although putting arse at the end rather than ass would make it rhyme better from an english prenounciation standpoint.
I'm not a hockey fan but I like it, weather the 'Yanks' will has yet to be seen, they dont like to hear stories of their defeat but I would ask them to read it as a poem not a tale of their defeat if they dont like it.
Anyway good one Stu.
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