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Originally Posted by Vampyr
Agreed. 
That was really awesome, ginkasa. Pyromaniacs are just..cool. lol. And it was written incredibly well, and once I started reading it, I couldnt stop. Have some rep, if you will.
Other than the error moogle pointed out, the only thing I saw that was wrong (and it was a small thing), was when he "raised his telescope to his"... I think you left out the word "eye".
But I was never one to care much about grammar, to me, it's the content of the story that matters, and this one had some great content. |
An example of why grammar is important:
once long ago there was a boy named vampyr and he was kinda not into grammar and he didn't really think it was important and he never used commas periods or correctness i aint got no problems with my grammar he said and i dont see no reason to change it well that was all fine with vampyr until one day the people of gametavern got really fed up with vampyr and his double negatives horrible comma usage and his lack of concern for grammar before vampyr knew what was going on he was hit with so much negative rep his meter instead of a numerical value read just this
geez people really hate you.
Thus concludes this tale of horror. Brought to you by: TheSlyMoogle, grammar whore.